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"Ellen, eat your heart out".


Announced by Ellen,
I dance down the ramp
and on to the stage
to the Who's song
"Momma's got a squeeze box'

And the audience
applauds.

Strutting down the aisle
in my best Travolta style
I point my right hand
at the ceiling then
down across my body.

and the audience
screams

Bound and determined
to show Ellen up
I move my hips
In a suggestive way

and the audience
cheered.


Grabbing Ellen’s shoulders,
I spin her around
and hump her leg
like the dog I am

and the audience
roars

as I lower myself
into the chair.







Author notes

LIONHEART This poem was written just for the contest by Desire. It was meant to be silly and to draw laughter from Desire. It won gold. Go figure.

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  • Desire gold member
    February 12

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: "Ellen, eat your heart out".
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
    When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~
    "Momma's got a squeeze box' My drink shot out my nose Oooooh the images alone with the Travolta suit and grabbing Ellen's leg is hilarious~I could see it ALL -rolls on the floor laughing- Keep that up the ladies in the audience will be like Girls Gone Wild- even the 85 year old granny without teeth~
    Oh my tummy hurts~ -
    Magnificent descriptions You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled-
    Bound and determined
    to show Ellen up
    I move my hips
    In a suggestive way
    Excellent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Dance also Spirit
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


    • Lionheart
      February 12

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      WOW! Thanks

      I won gold! OMG! I am so honored! It makes me feel like DANCING!
      I never expected to win this contest with my silly entry. THANKS SWEETY
      Richard

      • Desire gold member
        February 13
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        Aaaaaaaaaaaw Bless Your Heart and Congratulations! You had me rolling on the floor laughing and I lost my drink
        Thank You for taking the time to enter my Friend~ I am Honored Hope You are having a Blessed day too


        • Lionheart
          February 13
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          Yeah!!! If I had a bunch of fans like you, i would be a professional comedian.
          Love you, Sweety. <

    • Lionheart
      February 12
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      Thank you Sweety

      Since I don't really dance all that well, I thought I would inject some humor in this piece.
      It isn't really a poem but I learned how to dance by reading it
      I appreciate your kind words and your humor. You make contests fun
      Love ya,
      Richard


  • suseann
    February 10

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    Wow! What an entrance! And one I'm sure Ellen herself would admire. This descriptive verse of bravato dances it's self down the page on legs of it's own.

    • Lionheart
      February 10
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      thanks again sweety

      This was for a contest by Desire. It was meant to be funny because I think that is what Desire wanted from me. I hope!

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