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Engaged

Heavy, so heavy
               weighing down
                         appearing to be divine
          Sparkling in the light
      Sparkling even in the dark
Heavy,

        so heavy is this....
                                 this ring
                                          that is like a noose around my neck,
                                                                                  cuffs around my wrists

 

 

why did I say yes?

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 24, 2009

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    neat

    I just love the way, you describe the engagement ring. I am engaged without ring. Lovely flow of words, very smooth. And I love the way you have you have a way with words.


  • StarEyes
    January 24, 2009

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    I think it is time to re-think your answer by the sounds of this. If you are not totally happy, then walk away now! Dont make yourself miserable! I have done that too, and ended up walking away...

    Nothing wrong with doing that!

  • callmemike
    January 24, 2009
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    kick him to the curb and pawn it. I like it