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A better story

Dreams

smashed

and broke into

Unkempt dark silence 



leaving behind

a tired quiet gaze

into

embarrassed

meaningless

mornings;




Doesn't

feel good

or right

or fair

and yet

days keep passing;





Why some

hopes and prayers

don't qualify;




The restless rage

still lies

stuck deep in my soul;





Doesn't matter

Nobody cares

and

Neither do I ;





May be

I

would have

written

somewhat

a better story;












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