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Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind

Sunset
Sun rise.
Your eyes
Our hearts,
Becoming one;
Together.

Author notes

Together the sun will set and rise, each moment passing us by thou its deep in love and in his eyes I can see it's that we are alive, together, and in harmony, together. <3

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  • Riftkin gold member
    February 9, 2009
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    Thank you for this wonderful poem in only 10 words.

    Riftkin


  • StarEyes
    January 24, 2009

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    *sigh* This is beautiful! What a great read this one is! I love this! You said alot with soooo few words! Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!