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Welcome to Dinner, My Dear Ex

Welcome back, come on in and take a seat.

Relax, you know the place, put up your feet.

Yes, it's good to see you, been quite a while.

Oh, how sweet, you do so miss my smile.

 

I did lose a few pounds, not really that many.

Well you left me cause for you I didn't lose any.

I see, now I don't look like I'm so very big.

Are you sure it's now big girls you really dig?

 

Don't worry cause you didn't get a chance to apologize.

Sure, I know you didn't mean to put those tears in my eyes.

Now, how could you not know how good I looked in blue,

it's your favorite color, this is a little number I bought for you!

 

No, I didn't go out of my way preparing this great meal.

I'm expecting another friend over, so it's no big deal.

I forgot my manners, would you like to have a drink.

Leaving me was a huge mistake you now think.

 

 

I'm pretty sure that I can't give you another chance.

Right now, I'm in the middle of a most delicious romance.

Hold on, that's my friend, let me go answer the bell.

You too have met, no don't leave, now let me enjoy your hell. 

 

Marjorie Joyce Leslie

01/24/09

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  • Shannon62875
    January 26, 2009
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    aww

    This is a very good poem.. and i think this bastard deserves that at the least... You did a beautiful job with the background and the font.. I love pink and the white matches very well... You did a great job expressing how you feel and i hope you can get over this bastard..You also did a very good job with the rhymeing and the flow!!! keep up the amazing work and good luck in my contest!

  • Bob Fox
    January 24, 2009

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    Wow

    As they say.. Pay back is a bitch. But I found much amusement also in the fine piece. One very enjoyable read Marjorie


  • doolie gold member
    January 24, 2009

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    I love your write. Getting even can be so sweet. You did a great job on this. I could see it unfolding right before my eyes.
    Good luck in the contest.