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Saga 9...White Mare Dark Horse Breeds

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Joyfully the white mare and dark horse

ran freely in the green meadow that day

He chased her in warm loving fashion

and coaxed her to sensually play

 

She warmed to his gentle presuasion

and followed his lead to the vale

The privacy of the trees hid emotions

the stud preformed without fail

 

Quietly they returned to the meadow

walking leasurely down by the stream

Occassionally touching each other

their minds were focused on a dream

 

In due time there would be a foal

a thoroughbred it will surely be

Bred of pure stock of it's parents

so we must patiently wait to see

 

Filly or colt it really doesn't matter

but a champain for sure it will be

A first of the white mare and dark horse

an awesome specimen we will surely see

 

 

the story continues...

 

 

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  • Beret55 silver member
    March 27
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    A great saga. beautiful pictures and poems. You are very talented..

    • Thank you friend, appreciate your validation...plan to continue the saga...my muse is on hold...lol...mussie

  • Papagallo
    February 21
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    Ahh that is where those spotted horses come from. Beautiful write.

    • A floatingleaf silver member
      February 21
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      Thank you...I'm not sure, but I wouldn't be surprised...I believe they are called Pinto...lol

  • Rambunctious
    February 7
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    I am often considered to be a 'Dark Horse' and so this write was of particular interest to me and I found it a beautiful tale, soft and sensual. I have my white mare and she is, indeed, like that white mare you write of...

    More of this Saga, please...

    Ron...

    • A floatingleaf silver member
      February 7
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      Appreciate the comment...the dark horse I write about is like no other, very mysterious and sensual...being part of a family unit, could bring unexpected surprises...soon...


  • LittleMoon silver member
    January 24
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    This is really lovely and a very nice piece of art work to go with it. A love story with a difference and horses can do that, they will seek each other out if they can. My daughter had a lovesick mare follow her horse over fields, along a busy road and eventually found him, but he was a gelding, poor mare, she didn't know. Sheila

    • A floatingleaf silver member
      January 25
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      Thanks Sheila, for the cute story, sad about the mare, bet she was heartbroken...I love horses...mary


  • arafura gold member
    January 24
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    Very good!

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