Fools rush to sanctify their purity,
thinking they clarify deliverance.
Faith forges on without frustration,
bringing on disputed insanity.
They praise God for their holy alliance,
for he removed their humiliation.
Time makes a place for hopes intensity;
as true virtue learns earnest reliance,
with acknowledgements of bygone regrets.
Relieved pacifists of propensity;
anticipation without defiance;
are happy to escape the devils nets.
God's dynasty of salvation
will come with the twilight of dawn,
bringing desolations departure;
the end of evil abomination.
Wars unjust rage and fury will be gone,
all mankind will have a brighter future.
We have happy hope of resurrection;
the knowledge that: "six feet ain't so far down."
For we have a saviours keen direction;
the son of God, a man of great reknown.
Author notes
From Prompt one: "Six feet ain't so far down" ~ Creed; (Included in poem)
"Pfft! THAT was a challenge?"
From Prompt deuce: {{ Rhyme Scheme: abcabc defdef ghighi jkjk }}
Word bank..( I used them all) 
[[10 Sylables per line]]
1. Defiance
2. Purity
3. Sanctify
4. Delirverance
5. Humiliation
6. Desolation
7. Virtue
8. Intensity
9. Frustration
10. Anticipation
11. Dynasty
12. Departure
13. Regret
14. Salvation
15. Rage
16. Insanity
17. Pasifist
18. Fury
19. Twilight
20. The
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- Rhyme Challenge by Damnednforgotten.
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Your poem's made it to the finalist. I will finish the judging tomarrow. Good luck.
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YAY!
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*Picks myself up off the floor* Ok. That was good, Like, really good. I'm truly impressed, very well done, and good luck. -
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Thanks, Damned, hehehe (I loved saying that)
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Very, Very nice write bud, and to use all the words in the prompt, what a plus.
Great Job....Best wishes in the contest
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Thanks.
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