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A West Australian Daybreak

Gallows-like,
the dark beams of my bedroom balcony
are silhouetted against the dawn.
Restless, half-awakened by the dawn chorus,
I lie and watch the turquoise of first light
become suffused with fiery gold.
Unseen magpies carol from nearby trees,
whilst kookaburras laughingly rejoice
at the passing  of another night.

I am another day old.

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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    February 7

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    those damn magpies!! lol I enjoyed this read...but not the squawking of the magpies which I'm forced to listen to myself every morning! haha. Well done.
    Rory


    • Shenton silver member
      February 7
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      Rory

      Thankyou for reading, commenting, and for your very generous applause.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton