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Where Life Smiles

within those dreams and promises
where life smiles
leaving one within that grasp
of conscience
and in that note
imagination tells
influenced by
those times where
an awakening
reminds one of
completion
perfect in that brilliance
revealed past
that determination
within the seasons.

jan. 23, 2009

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  • Just4u
    January 27, 2009
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    All IS relative to perception and memory in the end isn't it...