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Nickel Romeo

 

 

he was my dimebag romeo

loved me so,

until "that" time came,

then he was non-existant

 

he is my silver-plated dragon slayer,

never leaves our cd's in the player,

flips our chips and chills our drinks,

my dimebag romeo

 

 he is my knight in copper trappings,

left here in his wayward flappings,

brings such smiles to you & me

he'd never, ever, leave us be

 

he is my man,

day or night,

keeps me calm,

keeps me safe,

he is love,

pure & true

he is the best

of all of you

 

 

 

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7. Nickel Romeo

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  • broken20grl
    February 20
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    thnkz 4 da comment

  • cirque du soleil
    February 3
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    he is my silver-plated dragon slayer,
    never leaves our cd's in the player,
    flips our chips and chills our drinks,
    Hehe…this is cute…though I can’t say I totally got the first stanza…we should all have a ‘dimebag romeo’, shouldn’t we? Nice take on the title here.
    Nice flow, too.
    Thanks for the entry!


  • singsong11
    January 25

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    "he is my knight in copper trappings,
    left here in his wayward flappings,"

    great lines!

  • cirque du soleil
    January 24
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    Please change your title according to the contest rules. I will read your poem then.