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The Day you said Good-bye

The day you said "I love you"
Was the day my world fell apart
The years I spent with you
Were filled with horror and pain
You broke my heart
But I stayed
I thought I could change you
But you only wanted to see me suffer
I felt I could not escape
So I would try to hide my tears
People would try to help me
But I only made up excuses for you
So i have come to say
The day you said good-bye
Was the day I gained my strength

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  • wiltedvamp18
    January 24

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    wow

    for a 12 year old this is very powerful power and got me a lil in the heart its sooo true. and getting rid of the person we love is hard but sometimes in order to live we have too. thanks!

    Forever and always,
    eclipser18