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Down by the Creek

                                                        " DOWN BY THE CREEK"

Green grass,
Blue leaves,
Hang upon lone oak tree's,
There on the hill,
Above the shallow creek,
Dampening the stone's,
Beneath my feet,
Ray's of sunlight,
Dance within,
A azure sky,
Eagle's fly to and fro,
Beneath the warm lit glow,
As the grass sway's in the morning breeze,
Dandilion's whisper to me,
Singing a tune,
Of sweet melody,
Swooping the raven's,
Play hide and seek,
As bambi prance's,
For a drink,
Squirell's race up and down,
Lone oak tree's,
Standing alone,
Transfixed by the rose,
Petal's so pretty,
Down by the creek,
In pleasant surrender,                                        scott schneider
I submit to sleep,                                                1 - 24 - 2009
Tickeling my toes,                                              madisonville, ky.
As a frog,
Licks at my feet,



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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    February 7

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    I was there right up until the frog lol. You penned some wonderful imagery here. A beautiful scene. Well done.
    Rory


  • LittleMoon silver member
    January 24
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    What a beautiful place to snooze surrounded by natures perfection. A lovely write Sheila