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Round and Round

Melodic music,
Bass beating,
Drums sounding,
Invading my head.

Arms swaying,
Hips rotating,
Eyes are shut,
No control.

Hoop spinning,
Revolving slowly,
Hypnotic,
Automatic.

Another world,
Another place,
Let me stay,
In this meditative state.



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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 24

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    awesome

    This is very nicely put togeather, wonderful flow of words. It's as if I am there as I read. This is one of my favorites types. To read it and being there.