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Over You

After all this time
I am finally over you
Wondering why
it took this long
Were you really worth
all the misery?
the answer
is plainly obvious

I feel nothing
when I look back
no longer regret
It was fun
while it lasted
and now its over
It was toward the end of fall
I realized
you were no longer on my mind
I was finally free

I don't hate you
nor do I long for you
any more
for after all this time
I am finally
over you

Author notes

I should have wrote this in November when I discovered this but oh well

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  • LonelyWolf Tasagka
    February 3, 2009

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    Damn good write. Forgetting the heartbreaker of your broken heart is so hard. But it always feels relieving once you fought it. I love the words you chose to describe that. So detailed and filled with emotion. Great write.

    Sincerely,
    XxDragonWolfxX


  • Misfortune
    January 29, 2009
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    Yay, you're over that asshat! =D

    Great poem, Sarah. =3


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 24, 2009

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    wow

    You gave me the chills while I read your poam. Very good flow of words, it runs smooth.Getting over someone takes time.It was very much a pleasure to read your poam. Good luck