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Fair Maiden Natalie Anelia # 43

This fair maiden
Natalie Anelia
Was such a delight.

She cleaned cob webs
From the skies by night
Letting the morning's sunshine so bright.

By day they dried
Hung over the fire's light.
For cleaning the pots shinny and bright

Author notes

The namd is Natalie Anelia
A ditty about a fair maiden I made up.

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  • Katie Lazette
    February 3, 2009
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    I like that phrase cleaned cob webs from the skies by night. Clever. Cute poem.


  • SomeoneBearyDear silver member
    January 24, 2009

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    That's just dandy!

    Name: Natalie Anelia

    Please follow through with Rule #2; and be aware that I won't be commenting on poems until the deadline's past, so I've asked all entrants to comment on each other's, if they would be so kind.
    It's just optional.