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Cuddly moments with Deeya

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Here comes Deeya running like an athlete

Bouncing feet, stretched arms with a smile elite

To cuddle Grandpa who’s sitting on a couch

She locks her arms around my neck, “Ouch”.

 

Deeya, “it hurts, what kind of affection is this?”

She rests her face on my shoulder, I’m in bliss

“Grandpa, I can not help it, you’re the best cuddle by any means”

Then she wrestles me down with mighty energy full of beans.

 

To get out of this tussle I prickle her to weaken the grip

“Tickle my neck, that’s my best spot”, she gives me a tip

The session is not over yet, I find my bearings and sit upright

She climbs over to sit on my shoulders and clutches me tight.

 

Then she swings backward and  forward and from side to side

To avoid collision, I hold her hands; she enjoys the horse ride.

Gobbledygook-giggles in gibberish lingo not to mention

It's hard to express the act that leads to harmonious progression

 

This is one of the many episodes that I cherish being with our Princess

We love every bit of her childhish behaviour and in verse I profess.

 

~~*~~

24.01.09

 

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......................Deeya means source of light.
......................Deeya will be five in March.

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  • cup-a-joe silver member
    October 18, 2009
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    That smile would break the hardest of hearts.
    I wouild bet that grandpa love the time with her.
    Great poem,
    Joe

  • meena krish
    March 26, 2009

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    ahhh..children are just so adorable and being
    with them makes us forget the world..an adorabe
    read. Happy Birthday to Deeya

  • a u r a
    January 28, 2009

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    delightful

    This is such a pleasureable read -I can quiet picture coming bounding with all her four plus energy she seems adorable-yes, your little princess is a delight you have professed in words very aptly your deep, deep affection towards Deeya


  • raspberry Greeters member
    January 28, 2009

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    Now i get the name.. Nice.. a very nice poem for her and am sure she'd cherish this and treausre this as well..


  • Sonja
    January 27, 2009

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    Already five? What a nice smile and cute girl she is. You must collect all poems written to her and make a book as a special gift for her eighteen. You are so lucky grandfather. She really is a source of light. Very nice poem.
    ~Sonja~


  • Lonely
    January 26, 2009

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    Such a cute poem for Deeya.. She is a lovely child for sure, and she is also lucky to have you as her grandfather A beauitiful poem for a beautiful child!

    Love,
    Lonely

  • EyesToTheSky silver member
    January 25, 2009

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    awwww, that was beautiful

    what a lovely poem
    I felt the love and innocent of a love that is so often overlooked, the love a grandparent for a grandchild (who is stunning by the way) but the words were simple yet so deep, and the joy emanated from the whole poem, thank you for sharing, I loved it

  • patrick20traveler
    January 25, 2009
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    Good work here in both poetry and grandfathering. Your rhyming is so smooth I hardly notice it.


  • Hated4life
    January 25, 2009
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    aww thats very sweet and beautiful


  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    January 25, 2009

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    Aww....through this episode, this poem beautifully expresses the fondness that you hold for your granddaughter.
    I am sure that you had a great time with her.
    She's looking sweet and lively in her pictures.


    Harrisham Minhas


  • baawri
    January 25, 2009

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    Beautiful...the picture as well as the verse..it is able to depict your love for Deeya in absolute sense. I am so obliged to read this..she is a lovely child.

  • angeldreams
    January 25, 2009

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    Sooooooooo......... cute.
    Sure she's a true princess! The picture is really really chweet. And the way you describe it I remember my litle cousin and his wrestling game.
    These are the moments to be cherished throughout the life.


  • forgot2b3forgotten
    January 24, 2009
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    beautiful beautiful piece i enjoyed it


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    January 24, 2009

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    aww this is too cute!!! I love it what an adorable piece!!! I love the way that you wrote and portrayed this piece its truly wonderful!!!! Children are truly precious!! I loved reading about your little princess!!!! You did an outstanding job with this piece!!!! Your details and descriptions are truly perfect!!!!!!! I This Big Big


  • jayyniecakes.
    January 24, 2009

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    well done.

    this is such a cute poem....... its a well written recolection of a happy memory.

    Deeya, “it hurts, what kind of affection is this?”
    She rests her face on my shoulder, I’m in bliss

    is my favorite part^^^^


  • Serendipity 50
    January 24, 2009
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    Children are our greatest treasures.
    Cherish that special bond you have with her


  • couldbeworse
    January 24, 2009
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    very beautiful wirte. she sound slike a wondeful girl and you sound like a good granddaddy!


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    January 24, 2009

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    Very nice. It sounds like you have a special relationship with your granddaughter. They are so precious and innocent at that age. Cherish her always.

    Mike

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