oh how i have longed for your tongue to dance with mine
and your fingertips to trail subtly on my skin
for your heat, and the beating of your heart
for the solidity of your body in embrace
oh how i have dreamed of your voice,
your breath against my cheek, the delicate tones
mingling with scent and serenity
and the intoxicating taste of your flesh
oh, how i have ached for you, through waiting
and through glass, through evanescent daydreams
that for one moment, the electricity that sustains us
shall be made manifest in passionate delight
Author notes
Option 4) Phrases -Oh how I have longed for your tongue to dance with mine
A contest entry
- Options For Those In Search Of Something New #2 by kitsmith.
750 points, ended February 6, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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Very well written. Love the sensuality of this piece and how well I can relate to it. Thank you for entering this piece in my contest.


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This is very deep and passionate for someone so young. It has a distinct flavor of an older charm in it. It's very well done
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