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For Thee, My Beloved

oh how i have longed for your tongue to dance with mine
and your fingertips to trail subtly on my skin
for your heat, and the beating of your heart
for the solidity of your body in embrace

oh how i have dreamed of your voice,
your breath against my cheek, the delicate tones
mingling with scent and serenity
and the intoxicating taste of your flesh

oh, how i have ached for you, through waiting
and through glass, through evanescent daydreams
that for one moment, the electricity that sustains us
shall be made manifest in passionate delight

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Option 4) Phrases -Oh how I have longed for your tongue to dance with mine

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  • kitsmith
    February 1

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    Very well written. Love the sensuality of this piece and how well I can relate to it. Thank you for entering this piece in my contest.


  • Cannonsfire
    January 28

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    This is very deep and passionate for someone so young. It has a distinct flavor of an older charm in it. It's very well done C