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Glare

When i see you
i regret everything
because....
i don't know.
Something about you,
makes me confused
and i don't know what to do.
I see you
hoping you care,
but all i see
is a blank stare.
I want to be,
left alone,
i want to see,
what makes me confused,
why you care,
so little
or even why you stare.
Something happened,
something went wrong,
i tried to fix it,
but all i did,
was make things worse.
I think i should stay away,
till the day,
when things go right,
but all i ask is,
"if you don't care,
then why do i see sadness,
in your glare?"

Author notes

This is about my friend. Everything in this poem explains everything that happened last year and this year(in school). I hope you enjoy it.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20
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    Very Uniquely Different...

    I'm not sure if I detect any sentimental, romatic images of Valentine's Day happiness, joy, love, or anything like it, to persuade me to fall in love with this poem, but I thank you for your entry just the same. I'm wishing you all the best in life, and keep it flowing, poet!! Peace, xx Cyn xx