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My Words only offer so much.

As the bells of Ireland sing
my tongue glues words together
while I walk in silence,
painting the world,
emotional.


I combine cultures and
whisper melodies on the
wings of doves.

cherry blossoms
kiss my smile as I
craft you a story
of romance,


only to wither in the sigh
of it's first breath,
with letters dipped in
hopeful companionship.


gripping laughter by the hand
I capture your voice in chimes,
planting them in a field of wildflowers.


 

like the rainbow after rain
I stand in plain sight
take me or not,


I am no great beauty
standing next to a rose

I dim in it's scent.


Comfort in times of hardship

laughter instead of tears

these I offer though I have

known only anguish

 

I am who I am

my past made me

and my future will

help shape me into

who I was born to be.

 

I can only offer myself

as my words are me

whisper in a lullaby

the tune of your heart

 

and I will show you

the steps to mine..




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Author notes

I don't know..lol. my muse is not working with me write now.
I think it has gone on vaction..lol. I will be anything you want.

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  • Daredevil
    January 25

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    WoW!

    This must be one of the best poems I've read sofar if not THE best. Very deep and soft words. I absolutely loved it... Good luck Angel!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 24
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    Damn..

    this is exceptional, very deeply revealing and very touching you have penned a beauty my friend.

  • oh sis this is so lovely and beautiful!!!!! An amazing write as always!!! Ur words flow so soft and smooth like a fountain!!!! I It!!!!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 24
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    This was lovely dear, very pensive.

    All the best,
    MJ.

  • Liquid memories
    January 24

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    Just beautiful

    softly this touches the heartstrings, leaving loves prints, indelible stamped on heart and mind. Very nice. Thanks so much for sharing.


  • Cannonsfire
    January 24
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    oops suckers!!!!


  • Cannonsfire
    January 24

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    Oh hun this is just beautiful C


  • LoveGoneMad
    January 24
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    wonderful write...

  • Bob Fox
    January 24

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    Beautiful

    Perhaps the most outstanding piece you have penned. The emotion and self exposure amazing. A 5 star piece for sure.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 24

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    This is such a beautiful poem of 'take me as I am' no one should try to be anymore than that, such an honest piece sweetheart. Anyone would be honoured to have your grace their family here or anywhere. Best to you in the contest

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 24

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    Well

    I love the ... hmmm I don't know how to describe it. The imagery for one, but more than that, this is a poem of emotion, depth, beauty, like the person who wrote it obviously and as far as the only thig you can offer is yourself? That is one of the most precious gifts a person can give. Simply wonderful.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 24
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    wow bravo a wonderful poem good luck in the contestmaralisa

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