A heavy ebony fog conceals
The dulling rainbow of life
Weighting my soul
Further into depths of solitude
Sunshine stubbornly hides
Behind trivial puzzles of lunacy
Abandoning me in a desperate reality
Yet I continue fantasies of
An illuminated exsistance
Praying for a hint
Leading me to what is lost
Weary threads of faith bend
With each crushing blow
Holding strong in the faith
Of an ancient promise
A contest entry
- bless me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended February 5, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah..you have reminded me of the ancient promise and touched the depth of the prompt as well..very well made work my friend..thanks for tentry..
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Thank you for the great comment and thanks for hosting such a great contest.
Sometimes I tend to need a reminder of what and why tragedy occurs in our lives and that there is a point.
So contests such as this one helps bring me back to where I know the truth is.
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This reaches out and grabs the reader, this is a most powerfull and emotion filled poem torn from the soul, great poetry, blessings with love John
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This is a very intense piece. I read it 4 times! Beautifully written!
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Thank you very much!
I didn't realize it had even been posted yet as I wasn't finished with the background etc.. unti just now.
I feel very honored that you read it 4 times and left such a great comment.
Thanx again!
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