She felt more comfortable with trees
who shed their tears
as she did
when heaven called love home
is there no relief
for a broken heart?
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 26. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended January 26, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a beautiful and heartfelt write. Congrats on the HM
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Last 2 lines... such a powerful ending. And the metaphor of the tears and leaves.. simply spectacular imagery you have used here. And as for the question... I guess it's just time that cures broken hearts, though how thoroughly i can not say..
Thank you for this entry
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You always manage to capture such deep emotion in your writes.. you do it with brilliant imagery, that makes it so real! Fantastic!
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Oh damn ~
This one really reached out to my heart; I love the reference of the leaves being the trees leaves - I'd never thought of that, I won't look at a tree the same again
Amazing!
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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aw a brillant take in the image promt your emotions are so powerfuly vivid good luck in the contestmaralisa
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I love this!
Sadly I relate all too well to this piece. -
Oh wow hun, you always have a way of making your endings so unexpected and this is no different! I am always amazed at the emotion and power you can write in so few words. Yet all your work is wonderful.
Best wishes in this contest.
Gaylene
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