Awaken in the night
Alone and cold
Heart feels empty
When you aren't with me.
A warm cup of tea
A fantasy of you and me
Back to my bed
With nothing but you in my head.
Sleep comes, memories flow
Past lives in days of old
Standing there beside me
You vow to always love me.
Time and time again
Thru eternity you and I spend
Many lives together as if one
A love that can never be undone.
~Lady Raven~
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Dreams of a man that has been in many of my past lives.
Written February 17th, 2004
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Another amazing poem!! keep up teh good work .. haha and your cool pictures!
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Than you for the comment Ayla, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Huggles, Mum -
Awww so beautiful. I wish I knew who I was in love with in my past life. Probabily a drunk old dude or something lol
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OOh i like!!! This is really beautiful. Gives one hope in finding true love. Nicely written.
Meg. -
i like this one
it's really nice and i love the pic
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this sounds like someting Andrea said to me. makes me want to cry because i miss her so much!
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enchanting
Wow. This just touched me to the core. Its soooo beautiful! (and sooo true) Lovely write!
Peace and love
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Beautiful write. The picture does absolutly no justice to your words.
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Another beautiful write. i wont be on to long. i have to put my little one to bed and then a couple of my shows are comming on tonight. But as soon as they go off Ill get back on and read more of your poems... From imagine27
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I love this. I do believe that love continues throughout life spans over and over again. I believe also, that you have many lifetimes. I doubt you can only get one. It takes many to accomplish all you are meant to. Great job on this. A beautiful love story here. I'm so glad I read this, now I'm all warm and toasty inside! LOL
~*Misty*~
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Very beautiful. Eternal love is the strongest and best kind there is. This was like a nail hammering into my head. I tried to hurry through, but I couldn't... It was too good. Thank you for sharing your words on the matter. Keep it up.
Much love from,
Sherri
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that was simply amzing
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Ooh, this is really good. I like it a lot. I know the feeling too, for that is the way I feel for my love. And I like to drink tea too. This is wonderfuly written and bores it's meaning into my very being. Thank you so much ofr sharing your words and experiences with all of us here.
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This poem is very nice. I actually feel that this is a love that can with stand time. I know how you feel though. I've had dreams of past men in my life that I just can't seem to get over. This line I have to say stands out in my head as I read this poem:
Time and time again
Thru eternity you and I spend
Many lives together as if one
A love that can never be undone.
Right now I'm in a love that can't be undone. Though there has been times when I thought that it was the end for us. But how could that be when me and him are so much alike that if we ever was to just fall apart... time and time again I would think to myself about how I thought that this was a love that could with stand time -
spell-binding
I agree with seraph powerful I really liked this on. great emotions and a clear message!! Imagery was also very good well-done thanks for writing -
This is a very powerful write...
full of emotions and imagery.
Keep on writing.
Love
Seraph
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