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truth Behind the walls

You seem so comfortable behind your walls but you know your pain is bleeding through.
So you hide behind that forced smile, it's all you've learned to do.
The shattered pieces you've picked up, but you never put them back together,
They think you lied, ruined his life. the truth you'll regret forever.
    So take the blame and hide your shame, they will see one day.
    Your innocent but giving in, just try to act the same.
The empty pill bottle in your hand is all that blocks the hurt.
It takes away the memory of the night his hand went up your skirt.
So when your looking in the mirror and your staring at that face,
You realize the person looking back is one you've come to hate.
And you cry and you cry. you don't know what to do.
When you told your biggest secret you never thought it through.
You assumed they's believe you, take your side,
But they called you a fake and told everyone you lied.
Now your sneaking out your window wanderin' where to go
you can't stay here and no where feels like home.
You just want you life back and him to go to Hell.
Your taking the blame when he should be in jail.
But cover up your scars and and your half hidden pain.
Tell them them that your fine when your really not ok.
But remember,
that the day will come when it's finally your time
and everyone will see that he's the one that lied.
But for now.
    Just take the blame, hide your shame, hope they will see one day.
You were innocent but you gave in.
Now you'll never be the same.

Author notes

it was origionally a song but i thought it sounded better as a poem.


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  • Jazzlyn
    September 9

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    .... this poem made me angry and i had empathy for her i know that pain and its something i can't stand to see great poem it really touched me
    good luck in the contest


  • dutch2lips gold member
    July 23
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    a very gripping write, thank you for entering


  • Antebellum
    July 20
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    'So take the blame and hide your shame, they will see one day.
    Your innocent but giving in, just try to act the same.
    The empty pill bottle in your hand is all that blocks the hurt.
    It takes away the memory of the night his hand went up your skirt.'


    wow. I really like this part.
    a stunning write.


  • Mokashi Senyu
    July 7

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    hmmm...

    i loved the writing, and i have never heard the song, but just a little misspelling on some words 'you' to 'your',... other than that, it is a beautiful poem, and you write very beautifully.

  • piccola silver member
    June 20

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    Lots of feeling here ... seems every line has a meaning. I think it is good as a poem rather than a song. Thank you for entering.


  • Sarin Rayne
    June 18

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    This is a wonderful and beautiful poem.It is full of emotion and I enjoyed it greatly.You have a wonderful talent.


  • borrowing.moonlight gold member
    June 18

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    Wow thats intense. definitely what i was looking for. i think you should have spaced it out a little more to make it easier to read, but its not really that important. thank you for entering


  • MoonlitRoses
    June 6

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    This flowed beautifully. Full of emotion and very smooth. Wonderful write. Thanks for adding it on our group, Midnight Freaks, reading list.


  • murderous-angel
    May 28

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    Omg.

    your write so beatifully. nd this reminds of so much alot of things that i have been through.....Great work.

  • Lollz
    April 6

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    wow

    I have been there too they still dont believe my truth - your words hav really his home to me, will they ever open their eyes and see who the bad one is?

    beautiful words


  • DraidenGunGiest
    April 3

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    Im not gonna say ,

    What this reminds me of . But I do Love the Work ! Very Smooth , But for some reason I think It would have ran better in stanza's .... Oh well , A Good write Lass !


  • dreams of a gypsy
    March 12
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    love it it was beautiful


  • Heroesrox
    February 3

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    Great flow to a brilliant piece! I hope that it wins something next time. This is another great piece that I have found in which no trophies were given. You should have gotten something!!!!


  • leeshylou
    January 24
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    Thanks for entering this poem
    it has a good flow to it
    I especially love the lines
    You seem so comfortable behind your walls but you know your pain is bleeding through.
    &
    But for now.
    Just take the blame, hide your shame, hope they will see one day.

    Good luck in my contest


  • L.Jay
    January 24
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    i've gone through this and it hurts alot. this poem flowed beautifully.

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