Hope is an oxygen mask
Life is a thing of the past
And murder is a fashion statement
Everyone with a gun
Becomes God’s final replacement
Don’t shout out to the sky
It won’t listen, I’ve tried
Don’t love anyone
You’ll end up dead
By the time you thought you won
You just lost your own head
Don’t kill they say
The good of the nation
Is to piss on perfection
My death is your ambition
So start swimming
Before you drowned in the society
There is no hope in winning
Trust me, its good with more inhumanity
So lets burn it all down
Before it grows back
Lets kill our god
To see what will happen next
Freedom is freedom
Lies are lies
You pick either one
You’re still gonna die
Author notes
without a belief in anything, everything will become hopeless. thats the meaning to the poem...
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wow is all i can say (an no, i dont like 'god' but dont get me started...grrrr)
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lol, thanks for commenting
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AWESOME-WRITE"""""
WHOA!! A VERY POWERFUL POEM!! FILLED WITH MUCH EMOTION, AND DEEP!! BUT I LIKE IT!! GOOD ONE! "GOD BLESS'...LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW...
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thank you very much.
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Powerful as always!!! AN ANTHEM!!!
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thank you very much!
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I'm not sure what to say... good write.
"Freedom is freedom
Lies are lies
You pick either one
You’re still gonna die"
Loved this bit... it's so true
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thank you for reading and commenting
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Amazing
This is definatly my favorite one of your poems so far. You're right I did love it. I'm not sure what to say, it's truly amazing. Love the ending sooooooo much!
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thank you!!! yur freakin awesome too!
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