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got to cry

As I reach to the sky
I can feel god cry for us
Why dose the sky cry for us
As god tells us to hush to hear him cry
As we cuss at the sky I can’t help but to ask why
Why we cry
Got to cry
Hope not to die today but to live
Deny gods cry is to decay are soul
Deprive the sky of the pain
Control are pain hope to gain some hope
Can you see the rain, the rain of god?
God mopes and we cry
Am I going to fry, till then ill reach to the sky?
To tell god my good-bye

I can feel god cry for us, for me, for you







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  • wow

    i think that the whole thing was good, but if god does cry for the ones who are lost, then he'll never stop crying because there will always be someone who will be lost. even at the end of earth, he'll be crying.....along with a few others that care.

  • ApathysEnemy
    January 24

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    awww.. this is well-written i gotta say that and really emotional but even though god cries 4 us... he cries even more for the lost who dont know wht theyre doing... god must be doing a lot of crying these days though... i agree