i cant wait for the day you open
your eyes and find what you
been looking for all this time is me
don't you get it we belong together
for ever and ever
cant you see
that you belong with me
i know I'm younger than her
but you know i haven't been with any other
while she's been with half your Friends
she might have big breast
while i have a small chest
but they have never been touch
i know we're different
she wares mini skirts
I ware T- shirts
she has blond hair
while I'm a brown head
she wares high heels
I ware sneakers
I know your better than that
what are you doing with a girl like that
haven't you thought
that maybe
you belong with me
she doesn't get your jokes
the way I do
she doesn't understand you
the way I do
she doesn't care for you
the way I do
I'm the one who makes you laugh
when you know your about to cry
I'm the one who attends ever game
and watches you play
while she's with some
other guy
I cant wait for the day you
leave her and come to me
What did you think
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Really great
This is really good (: You took a lot of these words right out of my mouth. Keep up the amazing work!
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thank you. i'm glad you liked it
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sorry, but the whole time I read this I was thinking of the song "you belong with me" by taylor swift. and you used a lot of the lines from her song.
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guess i did. try some of my other poems, there quite original if i do say so my self
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Bleh, I hate that. Not your poem I mean. I hate how some people can't just open their eyes and see who REALLY cares. I think we've all been there, done that.
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i agree with you and thanks for reading my poem.
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Been there
Obviously I don't know you but of course if this is true I have SO been there. Beautiful poem makes a strong point. If I were you I would fix the spelling but I mean it is your poem and you don't have to change it for anyone. Way to go. Love the breaks and the last two lines. Intro could be stronger but I mean the message is awesome. Look at me sounding like a poetry expert, as I said it's your poem and I liked it. Feel free to ignore me lol.
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thanks. if you have any suggestions i wont mind knowing about them.
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