Every night
she cries herself to sleep,
to one day,
she will hope to understand
which way,
is the right one.
Why can't her life be over and done!
She has run out of tears,
everything disappears,
why can't you understand,
the way she feels.
Soon there will be no more land,
just pools of water,
that were made from her tears,
and where the hopes,
and the fears,
of one little girl,
just appear.
Author notes
This is about a friend. She cries to much be cause nobody really care.(i do though) SO read Alone. its about her.
A contest entry
- Pre-write challenge! by Lady Michaella.
485 points, ended February 20, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow..... this is so sad
it breaks my heart to read this.. i am glad that you are there for that friend... may god bless you for that. i know what its like to be sad ALL the time with no one to turn to.. its a rotten feeling. great work with this poem.
Thanks for entering my contest,
and best of luck!
Your judge,
-Lemon Bee- -
This is really good...but a little confusing towards the end. By the way, I think you should stay by her side all the way. I hope the best for her.
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