i sit here thinking of you
wondering sometimes what do i do
some times it seems that i dont do enough
that your starting to fall out of love
and i know that it might just be me
but you used to just love to lay there
holding me
maybe your used to me
maybe its getting old
but theres still alot about me
that is left untold
i wonder when you will see this
im wondering if you will see the darkness growing in my eyes
i wonder if you know the pain that flows from me
so yes it might seem silly and it might seem dumb
but i think you should hold me
befor i come undone
i fighting for you to hear me
fighting for you to see
that your girlfriend is crying out for you
spend just a little time with me
i dont want it all
but i dont want to be ignored
i hate being on the back burner
left to scold
i understand that you want freedom
i want it to
but your starting to fall away from me
what should i do
i try to pull you back
i try to make you see
that your pushing me away
starting to forget little things about me
and i am not trying to be selfish
i just want a little more time
so just stop pushing me away
please just open your eyes
Please tell me what you think
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not only can I relate to this poem but you word it in such a way that seems to perfectly embody the emotion in which it was written. great write keep it coimin and never give up.
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AWSOME!!
This is a ver great write!! and totally relatable!! I really liked it!! and hope things get better!!
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wonderful
Girl you tell it like it is, I don't know why boys or men do this. I feel the way you do. A few wks ago, things went down , I got back what I was missing. This is what this is. I wish you luck.
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Wow
great write, clearly expressed & flows beautifully, such raw emotion makes the connection with the reader. well done.
thank you for sharing
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Thank you so much. as odd as it sounds. its truly what i am feeling right now. Granted he will never read it. BUt none the less i feel much better after writting it
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