When i fell down the hill
nobody seemed to care,
the pain was too much to bare.
I thought i had a family,
I knew i had a friend,
yet i thought this was the end.
What would they think of me?
Who will i be?
Will i ever see?
All i know is that the hill made me think,
that i had a person
i needed to see,
but when it was done,
i realize
dead or alive,
he wouldn't listen,
he would just think there lies.
Now 5 months later,
i still dream of the day,
and what i didn't say.
Now it's far away,
locked in my mind.
I can't forget,
or even set,
what i missed,
what i forgot,
and never thought,
of what i needed the most,
was forever lost.
Author notes
I fell down a big hill in Sept. 21, 2008 and most night i dream about the fall. (it was a coal pile and was about 300 feet up and i fell like 290 feet, 295 feet so) And all i can remember when i was falling was about a if i died what would happen to my family? would they care? and if a guy at school would care. But as you can see im fine.
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Comments
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well you didn't miss a contest because it was posted in one, but this is a very catchy piece and i do like the rhythm of it. it is different and it has a great flow. thanks for entering.
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hmmm... an interesting take on the prompt...
I didn't pick up any thoughts or feelings about love and romance here to celebrate Valentine's Day, am I missing something?!!? 
Thank you for your entry just the same, I'm wishing you all the best!! Take care on those pesky hills... Peace, xx Cyn 
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