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Haunting Me

Falling asleep
demons haunting
look around
they're taunting
crying now
"let me be"
look now
haunting me
scared now
finally sleep
wake up
alarm "beep"

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  • oWl Quill
    January 23

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    Wow

    This is good. Totally portrays how scary night and inner turmoils can get. I'm not even close to an expert so I won't give you any advice (even if I wanted to I have none). Keep up the good work.