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Refund a Miracle

She was wondering if
God might one day
Look into a refund
For a former miracle
So that He could
Give it to a
Family who would not
Self-destruct in the
Process of saving themselves
Maybe God was looking
Over them and shaking
His head in disugst
As she was wondering
If He really did
Refund that amazing miracle
How was she going
To explain that to
The one person who
Was making life go
Again, for everyone around
She closed her eyes
One more time and
Prayed that God would
Allow the odds to
Be defied one more
Time and that God
Would allow this family
To keep its one
Time miracle because they
Were finally getting it
Right

Author notes

2009

So 3 years ago my sister was in a car crash and should have died in it. She didn't. Now on March 18 she has to have another surgery for her breathing. One where she is making sure her son is taken of before because the chances of living though it are less than 50%.

SO pretty much I am stressed out.. cuz I am always the families strong one and I don't know what will happen on that day. But I am praying that I do have to look into my nephews eyes and tell him that mama will never come home again.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 23, 2009

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    good piece

    Wonderful flow of words, you did a good job well done. I loved the way you have God in your poem, and also I liked the mircle you talk about.