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You took her away from me
I wasn't ready for her to go
Though I may not tend to Show
I miss her
I need her
When will she come back
Is she comming back
Please tell me straightup
Don't sugercoat the top
Give it to me as bitter
As when her life came to a stop
You stole her from me
Was she too good for me?
Do I not deserve her?
If only you could preserve her
So I can express
What I didn't before
And give her more
For helping me while I was sore
You took her away from me
But I think I'm ready now
So as my last words to her
I'll give them to her slow
I'm ready to let you go

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  • Irisheyes35
    January 24
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    Too soon for her to go

    I like this poem. I really can relate to it. I lost my Mom the day before Thanksgiving that just past. And I still can't let go. She was a great lady. And it hurts so much when your not ready. I've been trying to get some inspiration from my fellow poets to write a dedication poem. But it's too soon. Keep on writing.