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Of Leaves and Stars

As many of these leaves
As stars in the sky
Standing on one
While the others up high
The leaves I can hold
And call them my own
But stars are much
Brighter a stunning sight
But tonight it's these leaves
That give me my hope
That someday on waiting
You'll be by my side
These leaves they are blowing
And will soon be my bed
As I lay under the stars
A  leaf in my pocket
A shine in your eye

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  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    April 27

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    This is yet another beautiful poem. I enjoyed it greatly. I'm really happy Ty posted it before.. he passed on.. May he R.I.P


  • autarky
    April 4
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    you don't see this kind of optimism a lot where i'm from. i like its freshness.

  • EverRose
    February 26

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    Te-he!!! LIKE IT!! AWESOOMMMEEE.
    Dude...you write a lot of poetry! But thats good.
    All I can ever say is beautiful, because your poems really are, or fantastic, more beyond words!

  • Hope4TheBest
    February 23
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    i love reading this when im sad