So lost in love
Never seeing the distance
Between the lines that she'd drawn
He broke his word
And then she shattered
Scattering her ashes unto the wind
A contest entry
- Free verse. by Lady Michaella.
400 points, ended January 29, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is soooo deep! Its amazing! I'm really wishing I could have met Ty.
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definately 100% totally unfathomably awesome!
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this is cute
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Ha, beautiful! LOVE IT. Duh.
Yyes. What Lemon Bee said...a hell of a great poem. -
wow!!!
now this is a hell of a great poem. i love the image you create in my mind. it can be seen in two different ways,
1/ that she shatteres from sadness, which is great
2/ that she breaks free from him
each 1 is an excellent thought, and i loved them both. this poem is well penned and good.
x
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