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a work in progress

Let me wrap my arms around you,
and learn how to trust again.
Look at me with those dark eyes,
and let me show you who i really am.
Put me on your back seat,
with the wind in my hair.
Show me how to live free,
open arms without a care.

{hold me, touch me, need me, want me,
tell me what it is that i long to hear}

Honey it dont matter whats wrong or right,
cause all I want are your strong arms
wrapped around me late at night.
I can smell the summer fading
out of the air.
We dont have much longer now
so come on baby take me there.

{hold me, touch me, need me, want me,
tell me what it is that i long to hear}

I know you feel the raindrops on your skin
but as long as your still smilin we wont ever go in.
Now hold on tighter girl,
I'm about to show you whats real in this world.
So open up your heart to me,
come along for this ride.
I know at times your still scared,
but trust me I've got the perfect place to hide.

{hold me , touch me ,need me, want me,
tell me what it is that i long to hear}

Now maybe im not over her
as much as id like.
But as long as your by my side,
I know everything'll be alright.
So put your tiny hand in mine,
together we can make it through the night.

{hold me, touch me, need me, want me,
tell me what it is that i long to hear}

[still working on the last verse]

Author notes

the first two verses are in the girls perspective the second two are the guys and i would like to do a combination for the third

My first attempt at lyrics please let me know what you think

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  • poeticwaste
    January 23
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    kudos.

    lovely write. unique style that caught my eyes.