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Suckerpunch

I'll find the solution
At the bottom of this bottle
Numb pushed away by numb
Excuse my intrusion
And anything that follows
If and when I try to run
There's no absolution
When you're living full throttle
No knowledge of when you're done
This is my conclusion
However hard to swallow
I hope you all had fun

Author notes

Life's got me down right now. Don't ask why unless you know you're someone I'll tell.

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  • Matthew OMeara
    October 29
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    Nice.

    You know, it read a little like a sucker-punch. I like that. Well done, buddy.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    January 23

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    This is well written. I have found myself drinking hard before and every thing going down hill like surfing on a avalanche. Well done.

    Mike