A confusion
of rainbow.
Streaks of color
soar through
my scattered thoughts.
Red fuses with me
and green glows through
and everything I see is blue
as if the rainbow and me
are one.
Hues shoot
through the morning haze
rain drizzles
the pat-pat-pat
of the drops
on my hood
a rythmic tune
to dance to
a sad sad blues song
on the morning of.
Yellow streaks the sky
and the flash of lights
turn to gold
as my heart beats tight
under the ground
a rainbow soars
above my head.
Hearts beat around
a nice catchy sound for me
to dance through the trees
to and fro
the sway of the trees
and the blow of the breeze
determine the placement
of my feet.
Dance in the rainbow
a jumble of happy mess
Under invisible mesh.
A contest entry
- Give Me Anything! by ToxicSuicide.
700 points, ended March 22, 64 entries
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I loveeee this poem. Relating emotions to a rainbow. Just lovely. <3 Words can't even describe how wonderful this poem is. Keep writing, thanks for sharing this with me, thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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Wow...this reminds me of a painting I made once...
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I love this. -
i am not worthy!
Ive never thought of a rainbow more then thinknig about skittls, it is very how do i put it? uum.. beautiful? no... amazing? no.. its a aweome beyond compare.. the colors, the nature, its very pretty, see? halmark, you've got compition! this guy cna write!
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Thanks, Sweet taste of music btw, I just got done reading your page, Support gay pride! (I'm extremely straight by the way.)
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Wow, this is a very powerful write. It's very different from what I have seen. I never seen a poem like this before in my life. this is a very impressing piece. Yet so sad and filled with emotion. Very powerful emotions to be exact. It's filled with confusion. Sadness. I am sorry you feel this way but I can relate in a way you did very good with the title you are so talented Kyler so don't let anyone tell you that your not because you are. Wow this is just so amazing grr I love this so much it really caught my attention I think my favorite part has to be ..
" Red fuses with me
and green glows through
and everything I see is blue
as if the rainbow and me
are one."
That's just freaking AWESOME! dude your so talented I can't believe it. You are very good with poetry. Anyway I really enjoyed reading this.
anyway thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece I hope to read more from you soon and remember you are never alone! 
- Star Crossed Lovers ♥
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OOOh wow i like this,
Really colorful and bright and full of excitement
You have a great talent
Keep on rocking
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