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Forgive me, Father

Did I betray you, Father?
Did I leave your side...again?
Forgive me, Father
I have forgotten

Did I ignore you, Father?
When you told me I strayed...again?
I have sinned, Father
But that was preordained

I pine for this key
To mesh the mess I've made
I shall cling to you
For when we have stongly locked ourselves,
Then how can we ever lose one another?

Did I beseech you, Father?
For your forgiveness...again?
Forgive me, Father
Remove this mark of Cain.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 24

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    The confession itself is the answer for the forgivenss already decided by the God..very thoughtful work you did..very well done..