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Never

Your hand sends a whistle to my skin
Upon whence it is touched, I feel...opened
What dance shall we, two lovers woo
When all at once I find it's you

So you have damned me to the brink of existence
May it be, I shall hold no resistance
For without your love, there shall not be
Any trace of remembrance of some fool like me

I shall never harm, nor curse, nor blame
I would die if you were to feel shame
So why doubt the kiss I've bequeathed unto you
It is all I am, and you doubt that is truth.

Lied to a man who could not love me more
I have swallowed my guilt, no longer implore
I love you deeper than you find me fair
So my love, please, lets never go there.

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