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Save Me From Heaven

While walking on clouds
The silence is nothing like life
So call me down from heaven
Cause I don't want to be here anymore
Yes, there are angels and they are beautiful
And yes, I am at peace
But peace is just so boring
There is no music
And our loud laughter
Is a shadow of a memory
There are just varrying shades of white,
I thought there would be color in death
And there would be music that made us want to move
But I didn't leave this earth to be in a borig hell
I want no piece of peace
So please save me from heaven

with love,
Your suicidal angel

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