She said it was his fault;
that he had no consideration for her;
that he treated her as though she was his slave.
And then...
she shattered any chance of him replying,
by turning on her heel and
walking out of his life for ever.
A contest entry
- Free verse. by Lady Michaella.
400 points, ended January 29, 2009, 14 entries
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wow.. this is a very unique take on the prompt. i enjoyed this a lot. i love reading poems where the abused or slaved or unhappy ones move on with their life and leave their sadness and in this case, the absusive man, out of their lives. this is a poem that can bring inspiration to those who are trying to break free. well penned
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Lemon Bee
Thankyou for your most interesting comments.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
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Melting Autumn
Thank you for your encouraging comments; they are very much appreciated.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Oh, great take on this, I wasn't looking for the turn around, splendidly done!
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Dark Matter
Thankyou for your exceedingly prompt reply, for your compliments, and for your most generous applause.
With best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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