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[Cutting the cord]

I've come too far to come back from here
Letting go was my only hope, but I'm still scared
I'm going too close to the edge
And it's getting serious
Your hearts being wasted on me
Don't you see?

Still struggling through this desperation
A slippery hand to hold
Because you're watching me calmy losing control
Without letting go, of me

I can't breathe, and I'm used to it
Spare me the words
That cause this to cease
I know how much
my existence is meaningless

Nothing can change this
This wasting away
Because I'm calling on the darkness
For me to fade away
Without memory of anything

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  • she still smiles x gold member
    January 24, 2009

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    You are a very talented writer! I really enjoy reading your poems It's like you took every single one of my current thoughts/feelings and turned them into an emotional masterpiece.

    *Still struggling through this desperation
    A slippery hand to hold*

    Loved the imagery there of a 'slippery hand'. A unique touch.

    *I can't breathe, and I'm used to it
    Spare me the words
    That cause this to cease
    I know how much
    my existence is meaningless*

    Oh wow. I'm sure we can ALL relate to these lines, especially. I don't know what the situation is, but please know that you definitely deserve better and you ARE worth it!!

    Chin up,
    ~ xx ~
    <3