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1, 2, 3, Shatter

1, 2, 3, shatter1

Breath, breath, breath, choke,2

Rise up to fall down,3

Scattered puddles, dizzy sound,4

Breathe again, calm and burning5

Watch me fall, I'm still not learning,6

Hollow, hollow, hollow, burn,7

Exposed, exposed, exposed, curl,8

Physical fighting, gritted teeth,9

Like paper, torn to shreds,10

Wind, blow me free,11

Ocean, please swallow me,12

Lapping waves, gnaw my flesh,13

Disintegrating, disintegrating, disintegrating, whole,14

Burning, burning, burning, cold.15

Twisting shapes and prickling orbs of green, 16

Moulding, shaping, conforming,17

Contorted to this trapped rock prison,18

Ash of clay,19

No comfort in the icy earth, and the sky too far20

my home21

My home, my home, my home, unreached.

Author notes

Yes, I know the flow is completley out and the rhyhm and everything is wrong, but I LIKE it lol. Still, as ever, I'm happy to learn please let me know if I can improve anything thanks ^^

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