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Ablaze

My life has been a collection of time
Jumping from one moment to the next
Heading closer to my prime
I seem so perplexed

My love life has always seemed a war
Blindly opening each door
Never wondering over each fate
So each ending seems I create

Now I sit before someone so True
It breaks my heart in two
Love of this kind is so very rare
To the point where I feel stripped bare

I fear what we would produce
What life would introduce
So we live in affection
With that being our only connection

As much as I wish for more
My mind will not soar
Thoughts will not cease
So inside and out there is no peace

If he is reading this
Understanding this thought that exists
A rooted love still grows
From the vines love still flows

Days pass and I still dream
Of a moment so extreme
To say the time is right
No better time to take flight

So if your reading this tonight
When we turn of the light
Hold each other tight
An idea I would like to invite

To begin a new phase
Kisses to leave us in a haze
So thoughts go unnoticed in the maze
To set our hearts ablaze

Author notes

I wrote this because I needed to, it maybe something it may be nothing but the secrets in my heart begin to unravel and thoughts are just that.

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  • Painter Meli
    January 24

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    AWWWW!!

    I loved it, absolutely. Be glad that you're in love, dude. It's the best thing that will ever happen to you. ^_^ *is glad for you*

    ~Meli♥
    P/s: *sends a hug* I loved the rhyme scheme and the perfect stitching of lines (it all fits together, and that's awesome; it seems awesome because there are some people out there that write absolutely random things - such as myself sometimes... *ah, the stream of consciousness...!*).

    Wonderful work, however! ^_^ Keep it up, and may your Muse(s) be with you!!!

    P/s/s:
    Enjoy the applause points...! ;D


  • Flightless Raven
    January 23
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    just wait until you get home