Cows are often called cowardly.
In the case of this one
I would beg to differ. For
This somewhat brazen brown
Wearer of a bell, was famous
For raising Hell. Slinking into a sultry
Shadowy milk-bar, she would place
Her doeful face right there, upon the bar
And gaze forlornly into the eyes
Of Bob, the bold bartender. Oh
But she was uncowed, loud and
Proud, a pure campanologist of
The naughtiest sort
Known.
A contest entry
- Daisy by ea.
700 points, ended January 24, 15 entries
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LOL!
Fun in the third degree! Daisy's my kind o' girl... I'll have to introduce her to Quik and Lucky Charms... two of the best ingredients to ever grace a glass (or bowl) of milk! As ea say, thanks for the (in my case, "re-") introduction to the word campanologist! Keep up the good work!
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You read my cow poem, and now I have read yours! I love the alliteration (brazen brown...bell) and internal rhyme. This is a cow with real personality! I don't really understand the last line, but I like it just the same.
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AWESOME!
Ah ha! The truth is out now! lol
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Thanks for this risque character sketch of Daisy the milk-bar fly.
You've introduced me to "campanologist" which I thank you for, as well - can't imagine how it has escaped me seeing as I am the bell expert here in town, though I did learn about them in German, so I guess that explains it.
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Excellent
Aye, a humorous write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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