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She of the Blood

He who strays in the forest at late
Becomes like a worm on a hook for bait
When the moon is full and the sky is black
He will soon discover the courage he lacks

The prayers you utter will all be in vain
For no one escapes the Blood and the Pain
The Devil herself is manifest
In the very core of the werewolf's breast

And she comes at night, when you wander dumb
Under the trees like you're under her thumb
She senses your fear, she smells your heart
She'll rip you to shreds, she'll tear you apart

The wolf is her family, the human her feast,
She who is born from the blood of the Beast.

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  • virtualneko
    October 24

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    Excellent

    I really liked this... love the cadence and visuals and the choice of gender. Would you be willing to let me quote this on my blog, in a story I'm writing about a werewolf in the virtual world called Second Life?

    My blog: http://virtualneko.com
    My name: Stacia Villota
    Email: staciavillota at gmail dot com