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charlie's conversations: fishing boat with sammy

where do you usually sink your line out here? I can't seem to find the little mouths on these bastards.

the trick is to be at peace with yourself, put your rod at peace, sink your soul beneath the water, so deep that the fish will never know you were alive to begin with.

so to the left?

just cast off on the side where you'd bite from, chuck; just keep it still.

sometimes i imagine i'm being so still the whole world bites at my bait. did i tell you that i have a girlfriend now?

no.



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  • sinfull
    August 29

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    out of the box!

    Who would have thought such beauty could be found with the stink of worms and fish. I'm really liking your writing style KUDOS


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    February 21
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    i loved... so to the left!!!!


  • film
    January 30
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    i love this so much


  • Cannonsfire
    January 30

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    I can see why you wanted to help judge Buk, seems perhaps I should have made you enter instead C

  • Suzanne Dia
    January 29

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    hehe

    I love the matter of fact in the face of metaphor
    beautiful, really
    makes me want to go fishing


  • chloris
    January 29

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    rod! lol. i was thinking whether you're pretending to be innocent or not.
    umm you've said more than you know. also i found out a lie in there somewhere...lol... jk. i really like this. thanks


  • natari gold member
    January 25

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    I giggling at Melissa's take on this. I thought I was the only one with a dirty mind.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 24

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    wow does this totally read like porn to me?

    its just my mind isn't it? i'm tired.


    • divebar
      January 25
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      it wasnt my intent. LOL
      but i can definitely see where "put your rod at peace" is a little suspect. hahaha


  • sharptooth
    January 24
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    i like how the end is completely off topic from the rest of it


  • notorious gold member
    January 24

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    Your dialogue is the best - you never bypass the "too pretty for any fucker to actually say in real life" mark.

    I admire that and it ends with one of the best words ever - 'no'.

    ;
    Jessica


  • styrofoam
    January 23
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    uh... make that wanted (:

  • styrofoam
    January 23

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    i probably would't have got the cheesy if ryan hadn't pointed it out.

    this is so interesting, i wanedt it to go on

    and yet it ended on such a perfect note.

    honestly, it reads like an excerpt from a book.

    a good book (:


  • Ryno
    January 23
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    This was cheesy - but an amazing cheesy. Amazing story behind this one.

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