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Hush

A whirlwind grasps me
Spiritually,
Twirling snowy winds
Gingerly.
I watch lingering
Dissipating,
Hope singing her song,
Moments fade
As the wind slowly
Whispers, go.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    January 23, 2009

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    i can not think of anything to change here. i honestly enjoyed this write exactly as it is. thank you for sharing this with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie