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charlie's conversations: bayside bench just after sunrise

did you write these for me?

i threaded my soul into them.

they're awful, charlie.

i had nothing to say.



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  • swim.x
    October 17
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    just raw. and wow.

  • ElectricBloom
    May 11
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    it's surprising how so few words can leave me totally speechless.
    wow.

    ElectricBloom


  • Ryno
    February 4
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    ouchie

  • Rowan gold member
    January 27
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    poor charlie. I loved this.


  • notorious gold member
    January 24

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    "they're awful, charlie."
    That hurts me. It's blunt and perfect.

    "i had nothing to say."
    Your emotions are obvious
    and yet you didn't even really "write" them in the sense of "Rip my wrists now".

    You're obvious
    and obscure
    and also
    a fucking genius.

    ;
    Jessica


  • styrofoam
    January 23
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    i like it. a lot.

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