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Love's Secrets

Hidden in the dark
Behind that black veil
A secret was placed
One never to tell

I know in my mind
That secret place
How full it is
That look on my face

I have so many secrets
It's like I never speak true
But one thing I said was
And it was "I love you"

But Now I am forgotten
We never even talked
I said one thing wrong
And out you walked

Author notes

I chose secrets and forgotten. I hope it all fits with the contests

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  • xxBlackSnowFallxx
    August 3
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    Very nice....love your poems


  • Samplette gold member
    January 24

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    You did a wonderful job, and your work fits very well with the contest. Thank you for entering.
    Sam